Let’s work on being descriptive!
Which means all pictures!
Leave out all the “I feels” and “I thinks”
Try and leave your emotion and narrative out of it.


Take an object close to you and turn it into as many pictures and metaphors as you can. Eg. I am eating a cup of (egg flower soup) in a white bowl with a white soup spoon


Sitting in front of a cloudy ocean surrounded by a white dam
It’s like the titanic in muddy hot waters
The bowl felt smooth like a glass sword
Like the face of a porcelain doll
The spoon a sled in the hot snow
The hot snow more like cool lava
The color of 4pm in the fall
The soups handle looks like a moon
As white as summer clouds

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